The king looked at the newborn in the midwife's arms.
"A dragon?"
"Oh," the queen said.
"You slept with a dragon?"
"No dear, you did. The knight you sent to kill me suggested-"
"He said the dragon was no more, and he found you in its lair..."
"I'm sorry, I'll go-"
"No! No. Stay."
Vex for Harris & Wallz has moved mag das.
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MH Thaung
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Als Antwort auf Micro SF/F by O. Westin • • •Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf Micro SF/F by O. Westin • • •that took me a a while to disentangle 🙂
Very nice!
PaulaToThePeople
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PaulaToThePeople
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •@ArneBab I already read answers that suggested, that the midwife is a dragon, but I think I need a line for line explanation.
PS: I meant queen.
Claude
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Als Antwort auf Claude • • •Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf PaulaToThePeople • • •@PaulaToThePeople and the king had suspected that the queen slept with the dragon in the lair ☺
The sentences don’t end: the two interrupt each other ☺
@switch @MicroSFF
Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •How I would end them:
… suggested, that you were actually a fine person and lonely and I wanted to meet you to see for myself.
… in its lair and could not bear to leave you there alone, so he brought you here, and the moment I saw you I felt something I had never felt before. And … wait, you are the dragon!?! How could I not realize! I’m sorry for what I said! So this is our child.
@switch @MicroSFF
PaulaToThePeople
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •@ArneBab @switch Ah, okay. So no shapeshifting dragon or the knight suggesting to the dragon to drink a potion to turn into human form?
I guess I was just thinking too complicated.
Arne Babenhauserheide
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PaulaToThePeople
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •@ArneBab @switch Oh okay, I think now you gave me the last piece of info I was missing. That the queen/dragon expected the child to have no dragon features.
Otherwise, why would she be surprised?
At first I read the whole thing like this: A king and queen enter the nursery and see a human-dragon baby. Both are surprised. The two never had sex so the king assumes the queen didn't want to have sex with humans, only dragons and that's why she suggested years ago that the king gets a harem.
The queen on the other hand assumes that one of the kings mistresses is a shape shifting dragon, who wanted to become queen and convinced the king to have his wife, the current queen, killed. The knight, sent to kill her, instead told the queen that plan ("he suggested as much").
But then the last 3 lines didn't make sense to me. And the replies suggesting that once you get it, it's obvious, didn't make sense either.
Now that I thought about it more: The knight could have followed the queen to kill her. She went to the dragons lair, because she already suspected the king cheated on her with a dragon. She killed the dragon and the knight got scared and didn't think he could win against someone who killed a dragon. So he told the king and he too changed his mind about having the queen killed.
So the queen says "I'm sorry I'll go [find you another shape shifting dragon mistress.]"
But the king realizes, he'd now rather be with a strong woman who can kill dragons anyway.
Or something like that.
Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf PaulaToThePeople • • •@PaulaToThePeople that does sound a bit overcomplicated, yes, but a nice story, too.
(though it isn’t a story of assumed betrayal that actually has a beautiful background)
@switch @MicroSFF
PaulaToThePeople
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •Zeborah
Als Antwort auf PaulaToThePeople • • •@PaulaToThePeople The key information is in a word that *is* said, it's just a small word for an important implication. The queen says "The knight you sent to kill me". Normally a king in this genre would send to kill a dragon, not a woman. So she's saying 'me' = 'the dragon'.
The rest confirms this by clarifying how it played out. The knight suggested [that she change form]. Then he told the king the dragon was no more - the king only assumed this meant dead.
@ArneBab @switch @MicroSFF
Arne Babenhauserheide
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Micro SF/F by O. Westin (@MicroSFF@mastodon.art)
Mastodon.ARTrollspelosofen
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Als Antwort auf Micro SF/F by O. Westin • • •Deliciously subversive (again!) and needs no explanation.
👏👏👍👍
William B Peckham
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Als Antwort auf Micro SF/F by O. Westin • • •Mullana
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I’m posting the sketch because I probably won’t be able to finish this in this bumpy local train I’m riding. Might finish later!
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Arne Babenhauserheide und #DieMaskeBleibtAuf haben dies geteilt.
Micro SF/F by O. Westin
Als Antwort auf Mullana • • •Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf Micro SF/F by O. Westin • • •that’s great! Thank you for sharing!
Love it how the font size of the king decreases as he begins to realize the truth.
@MicroSFF
Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •Here’s my pencil draft before I ruin it with ink.
I shamelessly stole the font size getting smaller as the king is struck by the realization.
@MicroSFF
Mullana
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •Awesome!
Good luck with the ink!
@MicroSFF
Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf Mullana • • •Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •@mullana I think I didn’t ruin it with the lineart ☺
@MicroSFF
Arne Babenhauserheide hat dies geteilt.
Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •cleaned lineart (with the pencil rubbered away) — only coloring is missing.
I’m scanning every step because I constantly worry that I’ll break it with the next step ☺
@MicroSFF
Arne Babenhauserheide hat dies geteilt.
Micro SF/F by O. Westin
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf Micro SF/F by O. Westin • • •now with partial coloring.
@mullana
Arne Babenhauserheide hat dies geteilt.
Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •I experimented a bit with Krita to get the structures for coloring right.
@mullana
(thanks to @davidrevoy for teaching me that krita is excellent for such filling!)
Next step: doing this coloring by hand, and then I’ll be done ☺
(for people coming in late: the text is by @MicroSFF — posted as start of the thread: mastodon.art/@MicroSFF/1127803… )
Micro SF/F by O. Westin
2024-07-13 17:33:58
Arne Babenhauserheide hat dies geteilt.
Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •Here’s the final, hand colored version of a comic of your micro-fiction.
I hope you like it.
(I sure do! Thank you for the great micro-plot ❤️ )
And thank you, @mullana , for the ideas in your draft. While this isn’t as intense as your version, I definitely took inspiration from you.
(→ rollenspiel.social/@mullana@ch… )
@davidrevoy
(for people coming in late: the text is by @MicroSFF — posted as start of the thread: mastodon.art/@MicroSFF/1127803… )
#ink #art #fantasy #dragon #queen #comic
Mullana
2024-07-14 08:47:31
Arne Babenhauserheide hat dies geteilt.
Micro SF/F by O. Westin
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf Micro SF/F by O. Westin • • •Arne Babenhauserheide
Als Antwort auf Arne Babenhauserheide • • •I had so much fun with drawing that this actually was the best thing of the day for me.
⇒ draketo.de/kreatives/best-thin…
From that, here’s a thumbnail version you can use as illustration for your text if you like to (just visuals, only two words):
My best thing today in sketchnotes
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Susa
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