The king looked at the newborn in the midwife's arms.

"A dragon?"

"Oh," the queen said.

"You slept with a dragon?"

"No dear, you did. The knight you sent to kill me suggested-"

"He said the dragon was no more, and he found you in its lair..."

"I'm sorry, I'll go-"

"No! No. Stay."

#MicroFiction #TootFic #SmallStories

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How I would end them:

… suggested, that you were actually a fine person and lonely and I wanted to meet you to see for myself.

… in its lair and could not bear to leave you there alone, so he brought you here, and the moment I saw you I felt something I had never felt before. And … wait, you are the dragon!?! How could I not realize! I’m sorry for what I said! So this is our child.

@switch @MicroSFF

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@ArneBab @switch Oh okay, I think now you gave me the last piece of info I was missing. That the queen/dragon expected the child to have no dragon features.
Otherwise, why would she be surprised?

At first I read the whole thing like this: A king and queen enter the nursery and see a human-dragon baby. Both are surprised. The two never had sex so the king assumes the queen didn't want to have sex with humans, only dragons and that's why she suggested years ago that the king gets a harem.

The queen on the other hand assumes that one of the kings mistresses is a shape shifting dragon, who wanted to become queen and convinced the king to have his wife, the current queen, killed. The knight, sent to kill her, instead told the queen that plan ("he suggested as much").

But then the last 3 lines didn't make sense to me. And the replies suggesting that once you get it, it's obvious, didn't make sense either.

Now that I thought about it more: The knight could have followed the queen to kill her. She went to the dragons lair, because she already suspected the king cheated on her with a dragon. She killed the dragon and the knight got scared and didn't think he could win against someone who killed a dragon. So he told the king and he too changed his mind about having the queen killed.

So the queen says "I'm sorry I'll go [find you another shape shifting dragon mistress.]"

But the king realizes, he'd now rather be with a strong woman who can kill dragons anyway.

Or something like that.

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@PaulaToThePeople The key information is in a word that *is* said, it's just a small word for an important implication. The queen says "The knight you sent to kill me". Normally a king in this genre would send to kill a dragon, not a woman. So she's saying 'me' = 'the dragon'.

The rest confirms this by clarifying how it played out. The knight suggested [that she change form]. Then he told the king the dragon was no more - the king only assumed this meant dead.

@ArneBab @switch @MicroSFF

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@ArneBab @laura Yes, of course. It's in my pinned posts
mastodon.art/@MicroSFF/1097108…
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I experimented a bit with Krita to get the structures for coloring right.

@mullana

(thanks to @davidrevoy for teaching me that krita is excellent for such filling!)

Next step: doing this coloring by hand, and then I’ll be done ☺

(for people coming in late: the text is by @MicroSFF — posted as start of the thread: mastodon.art/@MicroSFF/1127803… )


The king looked at the newborn in the midwife's arms.

"A dragon?"

"Oh," the queen said.

"You slept with a dragon?"

"No dear, you did. The knight you sent to kill me suggested-"

"He said the dragon was no more, and he found you in its lair..."

"I'm sorry, I'll go-"

"No! No. Stay."

#MicroFiction #TootFic #SmallStories


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Arne Babenhauserheide hat dies geteilt.

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Here’s the final, hand colored version of a comic of your micro-fiction.

I hope you like it.
(I sure do! Thank you for the great micro-plot ❤️ )

And thank you, @mullana , for the ideas in your draft. While this isn’t as intense as your version, I definitely took inspiration from you.
(→ rollenspiel.social/@mullana@ch… )

@davidrevoy

(for people coming in late: the text is by @MicroSFF — posted as start of the thread: mastodon.art/@MicroSFF/1127803… )

#ink #art #fantasy #dragon #queen #comic


@laura @ArneBab

I’m posting the sketch because I probably won’t be able to finish this in this bumpy local train I’m riding. Might finish later!


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I had so much fun with drawing that this actually was the best thing of the day for me.

draketo.de/kreatives/best-thin…

From that, here’s a thumbnail version you can use as illustration for your text if you like to (just visuals, only two words):

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